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Tuesday 14 November 2017

( Creative Writing )

Last week in Te Ngahere we were learning to write a creative structure writing based on reduce reuse recycle. I was learning to use Alliteration in my writing,

Reduce, Recycle, Reuse
Walt: Alliteration
Plastic bags take over the whole landfill and if we Reduce, Recycle, Reuse it will be health for New Zealand and less plastic bags to kill sea animals. Reduce, Recycle, Reuse you can reuse things and also making things that you could or can make rather than buying and wasting money.  

Reducing, recycling and reusing is a good healthy way for New Zealand to become a cleaner and brighter place, for other people to come over and visit. Reusing is using things you don't want and not using it, now you can use it over and over again rather than buying more things or creating, making, or selling it for money. Recycling is most of the important things, because plastic bags have been killing lots of our sea animals, second other people litter and throw away their rubbish, thirdly it has lots of poisonous things it was made with. Reducing is using something or creating it into something else.

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Aliyah,

    My name is Nazella and I am from Panmure Bridge School. I like the points that you used for your writing. Plastic bags are making New Zealand unhealthy, and killing sea animals. What is an example of recycling? Maybe next time you could check your writing to see if it makes sense, but either than that, great work!

    Keep it up,
    Nazella.

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  2. Hi Aliyah my name is Tiana and I go to Paihia School I like your post about reuse, reduce and recycle. I did a DLO about reuse, reduce, refuse and recycle we had to describe what each of those things were about. Where is refuse?

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